Travelling companion |
Travelling companion |
May 5 2023, 10:26 AM
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Levy Group: Members Posts: 165 Joined: 8-February 22 Member No.: 10,150 |
Yorso,
Right ho, I have done a lot of thinking and, well, I have it straight in my mind now and think I can summarise what happened more concisely than before; naturally in a considered, precise and well ordered manner, I share with you for your sage advice: So at first I noticed: Demon eyes glare Father's darkness hidden away Veiling his cruelty But then I noticed: Hateful commands Echoing through the silent home Father's evil reigns Then I worried: Fear and suffering Children's souls forever stained Evil fathers rule I blamed myself at first: Grief and sorrow Sadness engulfing my heart Father is gone I then reminisced: Memories shared Lingering like a distant haze Father no more Then I realised that it was over: Lonely emptiness Painful reminders of loss My father is gone I rallied and made my peace: Heartache and tears Wishing for one more embrace Goodbye my father Now what though: Eager anticipation Dreaming of distant lands afar Hope for an adventure So, after all of that, are you out and about on Sunday ...? Stabs |
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May 11 2023, 10:56 AM
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Mercenary Group: Members Posts: 1,401 Joined: 23-November 07 From: "Sunny" Wales Member No.: 59 |
Yorso! you broke Stabby, he is definitely now your responsibility...
all good H -------------------- Patch
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May 11 2023, 10:14 PM
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Legend Group: Members Posts: 3,812 Joined: 25-November 07 Member No.: 155 |
Lonely emptiness
Painful reminders of loss My father is gone This is a HaiKu. Well done Stabby. Harpell. He is not broken. What is broken can be fixed. Stabby.... not so much. Yorso. |
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May 12 2023, 10:44 AM
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Levy Group: Members Posts: 165 Joined: 8-February 22 Member No.: 10,150 |
Lonely emptiness Painful reminders of loss My father is gone This is a HaiKu. Well done Stabby. Harpell. He is not broken. What is broken can be fixed. Stabby.... not so much. Yorso. A sprite was following me in the woods and we got talking and he said he was a poem sprite and I was his muse. Turns out he was rubbish ... only one worked! So the advice is if you meet a sprite that calls himself ChappieFour, ignore him! |
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