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SNE
post May 5 2023, 10:26 AM
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Yorso,

Right ho, I have done a lot of thinking and, well, I have it straight in my mind now and think I can summarise what happened more concisely than before; naturally in a considered, precise and well ordered manner, I share with you for your sage advice:

So at first I noticed:

Demon eyes glare
Father's darkness hidden away
Veiling his cruelty

But then I noticed:

Hateful commands
Echoing through the silent home
Father's evil reigns

Then I worried:

Fear and suffering
Children's souls forever stained
Evil fathers rule

I blamed myself at first:

Grief and sorrow
Sadness engulfing my heart
Father is gone

I then reminisced:

Memories shared
Lingering like a distant haze
Father no more

Then I realised that it was over:

Lonely emptiness
Painful reminders of loss
My father is gone

I rallied and made my peace:

Heartache and tears
Wishing for one more embrace
Goodbye my father

Now what though:

Eager anticipation
Dreaming of distant lands afar
Hope for an adventure

So, after all of that, are you out and about on Sunday ...?

Stabs

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Patch
post May 11 2023, 10:56 AM
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Yorso! you broke Stabby, he is definitely now your responsibility...

all good

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TimTreadwell
post May 11 2023, 10:14 PM
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Lonely emptiness
Painful reminders of loss
My father is gone

This is a HaiKu. Well done Stabby.

Harpell.

He is not broken.
What is broken can be fixed.
Stabby.... not so much.

Yorso.
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SNE
post May 12 2023, 10:44 AM
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QUOTE(TimTreadwell @ May 11 2023, 11:14 PM) *
Lonely emptiness
Painful reminders of loss
My father is gone

This is a HaiKu. Well done Stabby.

Harpell.

He is not broken.
What is broken can be fixed.
Stabby.... not so much.

Yorso.


A sprite was following me in the woods and we got talking and he said he was a poem sprite and I was his muse. Turns out he was rubbish ... only one worked! So the advice is if you meet a sprite that calls himself ChappieFour, ignore him!

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